I like the ending of this chapter! The settings thus far have certainly been beautiful, but there was an absence of conflict that limited dramatic intrigue. But now Taka reveals that he's been hunting Elysia for actions she doesn't remember. That's intriguing! What does it mean for their relationship? What does it mean about who she used to be? There's risk now, and that's a great way to draw readers forward.
I like the ending of this chapter! The settings thus far have certainly been beautiful, but there was an absence of conflict that limited dramatic intrigue. But now Taka reveals that he's been hunting Elysia for actions she doesn't remember. That's intriguing! What does it mean for their relationship? What does it mean about who she used to be? There's risk now, and that's a great way to draw readers forward.