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David SMART's avatar

I really like your prose-style, it's very evocative.

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Elle Griffin's avatar

Thank you so much!

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Dascha Paylor 🇨🇦🍁🐻‍❄'s avatar

"Tortured by the weight of his own demise." I love the voice of this, Elle. Can't wait to read more.

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Elle Griffin's avatar

Thank you so much Dascha!

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Winston Malone's avatar

Wow 😳 Such a great first chapter!

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Elle Griffin's avatar

Thank you so much Winston!!!!!!!!!!!! You just made my day.

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Mark Starlin's avatar

A little more of the curtain is drawn back. I do enjoy a good privateer character. 😉

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Elle Griffin's avatar

You and me both!

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