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Jen Sako's avatar

I love the way you tie her joint and muscle pain to her emotional anguish. I totally got it. Also the part where the bishop absolves her but she knows she can't forget what she did. Love it!

Terrell Johnson's avatar

This is the best chapter yet! The atmosphere, the sense of danger… so good.

Elle Griffin's avatar

Thank you so much!!

Shifra Steinberg's avatar

“ Catholicism was firmly planted in the very best and the very worst of humanity, Séverine knew.” So damn good, the whole piece. As always!!!

Elle Griffin's avatar

Thank you so much Shifra! That really means a lot!